Chatterbox: Inkwell

The poem that I wrote for the febuary contest this year, and forgot to send.

CYMBRIL

                                         Cymbril, half human, half fey,

                                            sneaking away at night,

                                                tryin to run away,

                                         can she run away?  she might,

                                                trying to find her way,

                                              waking up with the light,

                                           had adventures, singing all day,

                                                she knows whats right,

I kind of like it.  What do you think of it?

P.S. this is part of my challenge.