Hi Admin! I've submitted two posts and I can't find either of them!! The second one I submitted I literally saw on inkwell, but it's disappeared. Help! Murder! Police!

Someone fell in the grease! Look on a back page.

Admin

Ok.... I will post again then...

Ahsen-

We run throughout the long halls, and out into the outside. Smoke flies from the city...

" Come on!" Luke yells, cloak flapping furiously in the wind. "Go to your master Ahsen!" he yells.

I soon find her fighting some storm troopers. "Storm troopers?" I wonder. "Haven't seen those in a while." I stop and I look at my watch.

"Message coming in," it yells.  

"Master Kyron!" I burst out as the message comes through.

" No time! Sith Lord Huntor has a new apprentice and they are heading your way! Escape promptly!" he yells as he disappears.  

" Hetuar? No.... He could not have. He would not.... Not Hetuar.... Not him," I say to myself.

" Come on!" my master yells, grabbing my arm and dragging me to our transport.  

I gasp as a sith republic ship lands.  Lord Huntor steps off, with Hetuar not far behind. My nightmares were true . Hetuar, my sweet Hetuar, who left me, my ex lover. No. He's a sith.

Anna Ironshield

Gender: female

Race: Human/droid hybrid

Occupation: Advanced padawan

Master: Lokoi

Light or dark side: Light (formerly, dark)

Light saber: two bladed, purple

Appearance: She looks more or less like a normal girl, but her chest, one arm and one leg are the same as a droid and she has a computer chip inside her brain.

Plot idea: Anna is the daughter of a great Sith Lord. She grew up and trained by the dark side but was eventually kidnapped/rescued by Luko, Ashen, Lokoi, and Clar Fost (if that's OK with you guys) and some other jedi troops and was taken back to the jedi temple. They were very good to her and trained her up as a jedi.  She is a very bright, kind person and loves everyone at the temple.

Sure! Sorry it's taken me so long!

Lokoi: 

My padawans entered the room. My back was turned to them. Every thing was still. Everything, quiet. 

"Sit down," I ordered, turning to face them. "Ahsen, Anna, we have an esteemed guest, today," I say, motioning toward Clar Fost, one of the youngest Jedis that ever lived. 

"Hullo," the eleven year old said, "I am Clar. Clar Fost. Shall we get started?"

Ahsen gasped, "Clar F-fost?" she asked, as if she could not believe her ears, "The Clar Fost?"

"The one and only," Clar answered, with a slight smirk. 

"Ehem, sorry. Excuse me," she said regaining composure and poise, "I get a bit carried away at times..."

"It's fine. I'm used to those kind reactions."

"Eh.
What's the big deal? So what, she's eleven, and a Jedi Master?" Anna
said in a loud whisper, a bit two loud, if you ask me. I dug my elbow
into her side and glared at her. 

"Fine. My sincerest apogies." 

I dug my elbow into her, yet again. 

"Ma'm," she added quickly. 

Just then, Luko Tarrin walked in. 

"I'm
sorry! Am I interrupting?" he said, with a bow. "Master Mueme, Master
Fost, Ahsen," he paused, grinning when he said her name, "Anna." However
when he said her name his face was quite serious.   

"No Luko, you are not interrupting, did you want too tell me something?"

"Actually...Yes."

~~~

Sorry if I wrote your Cherrie(s) wrong...

Name Arumana Gepon

gender female

Race Tholothian

occupation padawan

master  ki-adi-mundi

light side or dark side of the force  light side

lightsaber green

appearance purple eyes light brown tentacles  normal Jedi clothes black boots brown cloak utility belt etc...

Plot ideas

She escapes the Jedi purge but her master didn't, She went to kashyyyk and became a hermit. When she heard Darth Sidious was dead she joined Luke or something like that. 

Clar~

I wasn't really listening to them. My mind was on what I had heard the night before. I had been in my home on Tatooine with my mother and father when I heard Storm Troopers outside. I had listened through the door.

"Lord Saler demands more servants by the morrow," one growled.

"Yes," grumbled the other. "he is very strict. If he is to gain power, raise the empire once more, then he needs more on his side."

Then they had tried to get in, but I had pulled out my light saber, and slashed them through the middle. They laid dead on the floor. I slid them out the door with my foot. This stuff about a "Lord Saler" didn't sound promising, and if he was trying to raise the imperial force once more, then that was not good news. 

Ahsen-

I storm out of the control room before Luko can say anything and to the nearest window. I have a feeling I don't want to hear what Luko is going to say. I gasp and see the planet we just left and see it in a energy field. No one gets in. No one gets out. I run into my temporary room and flop onto the cot. I fall asleep. I have dreams of when me Hetuar and I were together. I bolt upwards awake and my breathing slows. We are on Endor. My master comes in.

"You have a job. All by yourself." 

I sit up straighter and say, "Yes, what shall I do?"

"You shall go into a cave and retrieve a special white lightsaber Crystal. We will land right out side the cave. R7Q8 will accompany you."

I nod and walk into the control room. I see Luke punching in Endow's coordinates and we jump into hyperspace. We land by a large stone cave.

R7 whistles in delight as we come off of the the starship. We go into the cave. I unsheathe my lightsaber and rocks fall in the entrance. "Oops," I mutter. I flip around in the cave to a red lightsaber readying. Lights flicker on. "Hetaur!" I yell.

"Don't," he says, using the force to bring me closer, and turns me around. He starts to choke me, and I claw at my throat. "Good bye. One pest eliminated," he says cruelly. I gasp as he plunges his lightsaber into my back. I fall and my vision goes foggy. I see him exit the cave and I hear my master yell to Luke and lightsaber clashing. I faint. 

I am super bored so I will write.

Ahsen-

My eyes fly open and a numbness tingles through my body. I search the room. I see crates and.... Hetuar struggling to get out of a restraint? I try to sit up bit my leg locks. I groan and sit back down.

"Let me out," he says coolly as if nothing were wrong.

"Why? So you can go back to Huntor?" I snap  " I thought you loved me!" 

"The dark side is much easier." 

"No. Why would I join a cold-hearted, back-stabbing--" by now Like and my master have entered the room, keep that in mind " lying, yellow eyes sith?!?" I explain. "Don't end up like Anakin! Don't make me kill you. I hate you!!" I stop myself. Hate is the path to the dark side....

Luke gasps and the pain in his eyes is overwhelming; a tear slides down his cheek. He runs out of the room.

My master is using the force to move the restraint of the room before I find a way to strangle him.

Luko sneaks in. "Hi," he says, handing me my lightsaber.

"Thanks. But I needed this around 20 minutes ago," I joke.

"Yea, yea," he says.

"Where's R7?" I ask.    

" In the control room."

"Can I see him?" I ask again. 

" R7!" he yells down the Hall.

" R7! " squeak with joy as he rolls into the room. 

Clar~

"I must go," I tell my parents. "I am endangering you by being here. It is me they want." I climbed in my spaceship and blasted off of Tatooine. I flew all the way to Lord Skywalker, and leaping out of my jet, saw another ship take off. "Lord Skywalker!" I cried. "There is a new dark lord. I overheard two Storm Troopers speaking about it last night. His name is Lord Saler. He is after me. I can feel it," Lord Skywalker nodded. "Very well," he said. "It is your choice, for you may stay here in protection or confront the dark lord." I fingered my light saber. "I know what I must do," I said. "If I hide away, then the dark lord will storm the galaxy and raise the empire once more. If I confront him, then I shall defeat him and save the galaxy. Failing is not an option."

Is it OK I had her call him Lord Skywalker instead of Master Luke since she doesn't really have a master? 

I don't know if I'm allowed to do two but I'm going to do it anyway.

name Ramo 

story ⬇️ 

He had been the slave and spy for the wicked band of space bandets for as long as he could remember. They robbed the rich houses and Ramo had spied the houses out for them.  If the Robert was successful they would give him food and let him sleep, but if the robbery was bad they would beat him. One morning (they were in hyperspace so they didn't know if it was night or day) after a successful robbery, Ramo woke up to a very silent ship; as hard as he strained his ears he couldn't hear a sound. He dressed and went to the bridge. He almost died. There was so much smoke he couldn't even see. By luck he found the door and as soon as he had stopped coughing he ran to where the treasure was kept. He pulled it open and saw Arsa the third mate dead on the floor, a small sack of credits in his hand. Ramo had seen dead people befor but Arsa really scared him. Next he went to the escape pods. They were all gone expect for the one with the fuel leak.  Next he ran to the view port. "Maybe I can see something from it," he thought. And he did. It was a republic cruiser.

Pause in the story.  A note: You may think this story is not about a Jedi but it comes later. 

Ramos first thought was: "I should try and signal them the Jedi shouldn't hurt me. I've never killed anyone or helped in a robbery or anything like that". He decided on this plan and thought how to send a signal. His best idea was to turn the light on and off and maybe somebody would see it. He then executed his plan; after a few turns of a light switch he thought he saw a light flash from the ship. He then ran to his bedroom and packed his few belongings then went to the ship's docking bay; just as a small ship landed. Four clone troopers got out, then a tall figure in a dark brown robe came down the plank. The four clone troppers and the Jedi came towards him and surrounded him. "Who are you and why are you here?" the Jedi asked. " My name is Ramo.  I am a slave to the space bandits and now I have no home, " Ramo said. "Take him aboard and we will see what the Jedi council has to say about him, " the Jedi said. "Yes sir," the clons said. So Ramo went abord the Jedi cruser and was given a room in the middle of the ship. The room was two times the size of his old room and the bed was so comfy he felt like he could go to sleep then and there. He had just put all of his stuff away when he heard a knock. When he opened the door he saw a girl no older then he was ( he is 11). She was dressed in the robes of a Jedi padwan. She said, "Come my master. Iliac awaits you in his room". When he arrived he saw that the girl's master Iliac was waiting. " I have spoken to the Jedi council and they have given me permission to let you live," he said " and also noticed the the force is streaming from you not like I have ever encountered  before. I have also told the council about this and they said that I was to run a series of tests and you might become a youngling but if you are good enough you may become a padwan. But tell me have you ever lifted anything using your mind or anything like that ? ".  " Yes sir I did once. I lifted my bag of belongings one foot of the ground," Rano said. "Alright, " Iliac said ," come here, this won't hurt very much". Iliac tested Ramo for an hour then he said, " I will send my test results to the council and see what they think; meanwhile Faladia ( his padwan ) will take you to your room and bring you some food. You must be hungry". Ramo did as he was told then fell into a deep dreamless sleep. The next day Faladia took him back to Iliac and when they were alone Iliac said, "The council told me your score was so high that only one other Jedi had a score that high and that is Anakin Skywalker. So I'm to send you to a friend of mine and she is to train you to be a Jedi. Her name is Adi Gallia. "Me .... A Jedi ... Are you sure sir ?" Ramo asked. "Definintely, " Iliac said. "Now Faladia will take you back to your room so you can get some rest because Adi Gallia is an energetic trainer. 

And that is the story of Ramo. Soon he becomes a Jedi master and has many more adventures with and without his padwan soranamas.