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I'm stuck on lyrics for this song that I was randomly inventing the other day. I'll show you what I have so far, but could someone suggest something?
Ok, here's the song:
Clouds rolling in, on sunshiney skies
The morning mist seems dark in my eyes
I'm looking at you, looking at me
Thinking how nice it would be if we could be...
Free as the wind blows, and nobody else knows..........ok, I'm stuck.
submitted by Koffee, age 13, In a cup
(February 28, 2009 - 12:10 am)
(February 28, 2009 - 12:10 am)
It's great! Seeing as I don't really know what your general idea is, I can't be of too much assistance, but may I suggest that you think of words to rhyme with the words you already have? Go through the alphabet. That's what I do when I'm stuck on poetry or songs. I believe Doctor Seuss often did it, too. :) Good luck with your song!
(February 28, 2009 - 3:19 pm)
...so now our hearts can fly/Up and away in the sky/I wish for the rest of my life/We'll be happy, without anger or strife/So come and sing with me/And we'll be flying free.
Ok, that's kinda lame, but I hope it helps.
(March 27, 2009 - 7:37 am)