Hi! I like the story! Is it too late to join? If not, here is my character:

name- Anistasia

age- 14

appearance- semi long blonde hair with a blue streak. Wears converse, dark jeans, and black tee shirt with an army green jacket. 

personality- somewhat shy, but has a few close friends

other- This Halloween she isn't dressing up because she thinks it's "lame" (I don't think that, just my character does), but she's going to the haunted house anyway.

You can join. We just started.

Sorry I forgot about this! Glad 'yall like my idea!

Mariette~

The door makes a high-pitched, gleeful noise as I shove it open. A plume of dust poofs in my face, making me jerk back. I cough, cough again, and step inside. The entryway is dark and dusty, making me shiver in my thin pink dress. I take a step forward, taking in my surroundings while adjusting to the darkness of the room. I try to step again, but my leg seizes up, and I only have time to utter a high gurgling noise before I plop down into a sitting position, frozen and motionless, unable to move. I watch in terror as the room around me grows to a size so huge it could be a giant's castle. A black cat comes towards me, sending dust into the already thick air with every step. More people emerge, tall as trees, it seems, and one groans in sympathy at my ...how should I say it?... inconvenient costume. Will I be a doll forever?

Gah, I know. Writing way to much.

Renny~

I relax on a chair as the others talk about what to do. Eh, being a cat isn't so bad. I look at the ground, frowning at a doll near the door that wasn't there when I got there. I jump off the chair to investigate. The doll looks slightly creepy, and I hiss despite myself. Oh brother. This poor kid probably dressed as a doll. I meow to get the girls' attentions (Renny is the only boy here. Gee.) and they look at me. I point toward the doll, and meow again. Skye realizes almost immediatly and tells the others what happened to the doll kid. I sighed and shrugged the doll onto my back, and moved to the rest of the kids. 

Here I end you... do you like?

Anistasia:

"Anastasia! I thought you were going to dress up!" Mom called to me from the top of the stairs.

"No, Mom. It's lame. I'm not a baby," I replied in a sassy voice.

"Hey, I don't like your tone!" Mom started to say, but I had already slammed the door.

I breathed in the cool night air as I walked down the street. I haunted house was only a block away and my friends and I had a bet that whoever stayed the longest got all our candy. Lucky for me I wasn't going trick-or-treating this year so I had nothing to lose. I looked at the house, it was the perfect haunted house, dark, shutters flapping in the breeze, broken windows, and strange creaks and moans. I hesitated before going inside, I looked at my watch, 7:30. They should be here by now. Oh, well. As I stepped over the threshhold of the door, I felt tingley all over. Somthing was wrong. I looked at my feet, still the same, my hands, my arms, my legs. There was a small, Victorian style mirror hanging in the corner, I stepped over to it and was shocked at what I saw. In big bold letters the word LOSER was on my forhead as if someone had written it in sharpie. 

Aqua ran down the hall, leaving a trail of ice in her wake. HOW was this happening?

She suddenly tripped over a cat......... 

It was Renny. She could tell. She stepped back as she realized her druid powers must have been kicking in. The cat-Renny-person said, "Great. Another girl to fawn all over me." Aqua scowled. "For your information, Renny," Aqua said, "you are a spineless, mean, cowardly, punkish jock and you should be brought down a peg."

"Wait.... you can understand me?" asked Renny, forgetting that Aqua had just insulted him. Aqua sighed. "I dressed as a druid. Animals and elements are characteristic of druids.."

Aqua saw the other girls-things-looking at her strangely, and she said in perfect deadpan, "Hullo, I'm Aqua, and I'm magical, I suppose."

Keep changing tenses. Bah! 

Renny~

I look again at the door, seeing it open. I meow in surprise and jump onto the chair, making the doll slide onto the floor. I look at her, sighing with relief she didn't break. Skye, Tara, and Aria all look at the door, groaning. I chuckle slightly and shift my attention toward the newcomer. She doesn't have a costume... Wonder what's gonna happen to her... She looks at the mirror and then touches her forehead. The girl doesn't seem to notice us, most likely too intent in her forehead. I shift closer, and laugh (which sounds like a joyful meow) despite myself. 'LOSER' is written on her head, as if with sharpie. I laugh even more, smiling. Gee, glad that didn't happen to me. Skye, Tara, and Aria finally see what's so funny, and they manage to stuffle their giggles. Aria gives up all together and laughs happily. The girl turns around, finally realizing we are here.

"Who... Who are you people?" she whispers, her eyes glancing at the three of them. I hiss and jump onto the girl's leg. She looks at me in surprise.

"That's Renny. He use to be a human, but got transformed like the rest of us," Tara interrupts, looking at me and frowning. I smirk.

"So.. So this is you guys' costumes?.. Okay... I'm... I'm Anastasia," she mumbles, looking at us all. Another kid. This is going great.