I call villain! I was to late to enter this in crowd-sorcery

Name: Victoria Ellirive

Appearance: Long jet black hair that falls to her knees usualy in a long plait down her back and twined with gold thread. Bright piercing blue eyes that that seem to see right though you. She wears a long blood red gown embosed with her familys crest , an ebony black dragon. When in combat she wears high black boots and a black leather skirt with along black cape and hood thus earning her the feared name Black Shadow. She always wears a shining gold crown with a blood red dragon on it. She carries a shining silver sword with rubies and wields it with skill she is beautiful yet bitter and angry.

Background: One day when Victoria was 14 she went outside to tend to the family dragons Her father was widely known for his ability to manage and keep dragons the entire family knew how to ride and live with dragons leading to the fact that their crest had a dragon on it. Victoria had three siblings and a kind mother and father. She had extensive knowledge of the different dragon types and behavior. She was happy untill the fatefull day she went out to tend to the dragons and heard explosions and saw flames leaping up from her family's castle. She leaped on her favorite dragon, a red flaming firebreath dragon named Crimson Blaze. She flew into the air, landed, and rushed throught the flame and rubble, screamed for her family, then she saw every one of them dead. Gone from her forever; she was utterly brokenhearted and vowed to avenge them if it was the last thing she did. Crazed with grief she stumbled out to search for the murderers. Later she found out that the other people--neighbors, friends, strangers, and animals--had attacked hers and two other castles for no apparent reason. Torn between anger and grief Victoria fled her home and started raising dragons and living with that one painfull memory. Since that time (4 years ago) she has caused terror and fright to the people who had wronged her. People say that that day her heart turned to steel and she never felt any feeling except anger, but there is one thing that can pierce steel ..... a diamond. Someone who is one in a million might be able to defeat her.

strengths: She can ride and control many species of dragons and she does not feel remorse. If she feels sorrow she never shows it plus she is an experienced sword fighter.

Weaknesses: Victoria will do anything for her dragons especially Crimson Blaze, and she still remembers her family and that causes her pain.

Personality: She is very clever and skilled her knowledge of dragons is
unbeatable. She used to be a playful intelligent happy young girl but now
she is bitter angry and powerful.

Some Story Sentences: 

Victoria Ellirive strolled up and down the narrow hallway thinking and
muttering to herself. "I must put my master plan in to effect," she
thought. "I must take the dragons and lead another attack; they have not
suffered nearly enough." A frown furrowed her beautiful face, then
suddenly she reeled in pain and a memory flashed in front of her. She
was running, tears streaming down her face. She was screaming for her
parents for Isabella, for Marie, for Anna. All was burning. She remembered
her singed dress, the thundering in her ears, the pain of not knowing
what happened to them, the feel of the wind blowing her black hair as she
rode Crimson Blaze "NO!" she shrieked, "NO!" Immediatly the pain stopped;
she was here not there and she was angrier than ever. "I must block
that memory," she thought, but it kept coming back. Anger bubbled like a
volcano inside her heart of steel and her piercing blue eyes flashed as
she said aloud, "The only way to avenge them is to torment their
murderers." That's exactly what she would do for was she not heir to the
castle of Dragonlia? Was she not the black shadow? Was she not the
dragon conquerer, the Queen of them all ? She resumed her pacing of the
marble hallways. She had made up her mind. "Crimson Blaze!" she cried. At
once the sleek beautiful flaming firebreath leaped gracefuly from atop
the ledge she was sleeping on. Victoria smiled as the pride of her heart
the only thing left of her family bore her to her next destination. Those people would pay for the pain they had caused her they would pay
dearly.

Dear Admin please post this after my first post about the villainess Victoria Ellirive. I forgot personality and sentences thank you!

 Done. Now would you please do us and your fellow CBers a favor by trying to use as much correct punctuation and capitalization as possible? We like Chatterbox postings to be a good representation of Cricket's standards, not huge blocks of runon sentences. Thank you.

Admin

Oh, I think I need to add all of this stuff.

How is he different from others?: He is very fun and lovable, and is very nice to be around with. His depression is never shown.

How is he strong?: He manages to keep his depression away from others so no one gets upset. 

How is he vulnerable?: He can sometimes go into fits and will start acting people he loves.

What does he fear most?: People finding out his true past and personality.

Your sentences: If you look at this boy, you would think he is perfectly normal. He sits on a bench, eats a hamburger, and texts into his phone. But once you turn your back to him, he is jumping from his seat, screeching into his hand that he does not want blueberries in his muffins. This boy goes by Justin. Justin Mellika. Now, talking into your hand and not wanting blueberries in your muffins is not what you would do every day. No no, this boy is not what you call normal. You see, he is good with gadgets, yes indeed. He got it from his parents, who were geeks and smarties. Don't go shunning Justin. Cause he's got more in his pockets then you can imagine.

Other: He is good with gadgets and gizmos. Very high-tecky. 

Your villian is AWESOME !