Dark Ones, a

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Dark Ones, a

Dark Ones, a story about Khaos

The dark hooded riders leapt through the sighing trees, and the wind built to a crescendo as they ran by. The trees swept their arms away from the battered path as though terrified of the onslaught. A farmer ran out of his house, stubborn pride making him impervious to fear.

"That's my crops, ya wastebuckets!" he howled, hurling a rotten turnip at the leader of the party. Something could be said for the farmer's aim, as it struck the leader of the party right in the nape of his neck. The farmer whooped triumphantly as the leader got off his horse, then froze as the leader took off his hood. A tall, handsome man with deep brown hair and crimson eyes grinned at him. The farmer fell to his knees.

"Khaos..... I.... didn't........"

"Yes, you did. You meant every word of it."

Khaos' voice seemed to belong to a kind, goodhearted young man, not the hardened killer who grinned at the farmer with malice.

"Take everything! I'm sorry!" the farmer gasped, as tendrils of smoke whirled around Khaos like laughing schoolchildren.

"This," he turned to his monsters, "Is what happens to people who don't obey me."

Khaos' hand burned with cold, white fire as he toched the man softly on the cheek.

"Tell the devil Khaos sent you." Khaos smiled maliciously.

The man didn't move.

He didn't scream.

He just stood there, white as a sheet.

And three seconds later, white ashes blew away in the mocking, laughing wind.

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So, yeah.......................... I made this when I was bored..............  Meh, it's ok.

submitted by Brooke E.
(September 27, 2014 - 9:50 am)

Creepy...

submitted by Everinne, age 15, Khaotic
(September 27, 2014 - 11:59 am)

He, thanks.

submitted by Brooke E.
(September 27, 2014 - 8:39 pm)

This is awesome! It shows how relentlessly despicable you are, Khaos. Make me proud and kill Fable, K?

submitted by Darkshroud, still in the forest
(September 27, 2014 - 9:29 pm)

Despicable? I just don't have time for morals and such nonsense. Still tracking Fable down, but believe me I'm gonna RIP HER TO SHREDS!!!!

submitted by Khaos
(September 28, 2014 - 7:38 am)

Oh my gosh, no! :O

submitted by Madeline
(September 28, 2014 - 3:16 pm)

CREEPY! GREAT! Sorry for CAPS LOCK

 

CAPTCHA says: oonw! Oh no? 

submitted by Winter Firefly
(September 28, 2014 - 11:18 am)

Thanks! I think Winter's CAPTCHA said oh no because he's scared of Khaos.

submitted by Brooke E.
(September 28, 2014 - 12:53 pm)

Brooke E., this was super good! Why don't you show it to Fred? Just post it on his most recent thread or something. :)

submitted by Madeline
(September 28, 2014 - 3:17 pm)

(blushes) Well, ok..............

submitted by Brooke E.
(September 28, 2014 - 7:58 pm)

Yay! Brooke, thanks for showing Fred! It seemed like he really liked it!!

submitted by Madeline
(October 4, 2014 - 6:41 pm)

Top!!

submitted by Top!!
(October 5, 2014 - 10:27 am)

Pretty good. I wonder who the person posing as Khaos is?

CAPTCHA says unzy uneasy? why are our CAPTCHA's scared of Khaos I wonder. My villain could wipe him out utterly.

submitted by Dragon girl, Is riding Dragons
(October 5, 2014 - 4:25 pm)

Khaos and I share an account. Hold up, he wants to talk........

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Oh, DG, I'm sooo sorry I DISAPPOINTED you. Is your villain one of those twinkly all-powerful omnipresent beings? Posh. Seen those a MILLION times. And defeated them.

Or is your character some all-powerful person? Oh, whaaa, I have these powers that are difficult to control, so I'll be EVIL!! Ha.

Sure, I'm a monster. What I do is evil. But I've found it works when no one knows you're coming.

In other words, I WON, HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

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Sorry, he has a sore spot about that (Khaos be quiet!!) And I think your villains are probably epic. Could you send me a link? 

submitted by Brooke E./Khaos
(October 5, 2014 - 7:08 pm)