I'm starting a
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I'm starting a
I'm starting a poem thread/club thing. Everyone can post poems and comment about them.
submitted by Bookbug
(July 14, 2014 - 10:17 am)
(July 14, 2014 - 10:17 am)
I'm starting a poem thread/club thing. Everyone can post poems and comment about them.
Here's mine, called Golden Tree:
Tree;
With branches of gold
It's out there
I've been told
Leaf;
Rich in value
Falls
At my feet
This tree
Shall not be chopped
With an ax
And sold in a shop
Gold;
Solid
With money
Secret;
This tree is
Nobody knows
Why I'm so rich
(July 14, 2014 - 11:44 am)
Wow, this is really good! I like the metaphors. Here's my poem:
My Imagination Is...
The voice of soft breeze, gently pushing things to their limits.
A never-ending well of twinkling yellow.
A shiny-eyed tiger of secret wishes.
The bubbly foam of my heart.
A sparkling clear lake of summer times.
The leaping flames of the past.
A wrapped-up gift of joy.
Trees, waving in the breeze of tomorrow.
Hope you guys like it! Does anyone like writing couplets?
(July 14, 2014 - 4:41 pm)