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Poem Writing

Poem Writing

We each write a line to a poem, and when it ends, we start another one.

Here it goes:

Twilight falls.

White eyes appear and

submitted by Madeline
(February 5, 2014 - 12:12 pm)

This looks interesting, so here goes. (I don't know if my last line makes any sense though.)

A black paw creeps out of the shadows

And into the darkening burnished light

P.S. What has white eyes? I always think of eyes as black or brown or green etc.

submitted by CaptainReed, age undecided, BurnishedTwilight
(February 9, 2014 - 11:54 am)

It was a metaphor--referring to white eyes as the stars of the night sky

submitted by Madeline
(February 10, 2014 - 7:57 pm)

Oops, my bad! Now my lines make even less sense!

submitted by CaptainReed, age undecided, NonsenseLand
(February 11, 2014 - 8:03 am)

No, I like it. It's mysterious, in an unnerving sort of way.

submitted by Madeline
(February 13, 2014 - 4:20 pm)

TOP!!!

Is anyone other than Madeline and me gonna write here?

submitted by CaptainRead, age undecided, TTTTTTOOOOOOOOPPPPP
(February 14, 2014 - 12:50 pm)