Chatterbox: Inkwell

I was writing a book about a girl who lives on Jupiter (WAY futeristic) but I got stuck. so Im leaving it for a while sooooooooooooooooooo I just started a new book. about a girl named Tanya. details below.........

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Every girl
dreams of being a Princess, Right? Especially when you get everything you want,
Right? Well, that’s only one of the many dreams that may become possible if you
have spotted hair and strangely colored eyes. When thirteen year old Tanya
Poens, fourteen year old Briana Hidox, and sixteen year old Snowy Dion start receiving
strange packages with owl sized clothes and invitations to parties hundreds of
miles away start to arrive. Little do they know the dreams-and dangers that are
about to begin…     

what do all y'all think?