A great idea

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A great idea

A great idea

So I had a great idea. A man wakes up with no memory and goes about for a while before realizing he's dead. What do you think should happen next?

I thought maybe he should find out that the villain orchestrated his death or something and then must stop him, but that seems a bit... obvious. 

submitted by Joe Dosie Doe, age 13, Doing the Tango Land
(March 8, 2013 - 6:47 pm)

back to the Inkwell

*cough, cough* The World Ends With You *cough, cough*

submitted by Red, age 13, Tokyo
(March 8, 2013 - 8:30 pm)

What does that video game have to do with it?

submitted by Joe Dosie Doe, age 13, Someone's brain
(March 9, 2013 - 4:35 pm)

Well, isn't that what happens to Neku? Oh never mind.

submitted by Red, age 13, Tokyo
(March 11, 2013 - 8:21 pm)

It's a unique plot, but I don't think a villain would be the best choice to go on. What type of genre were you thinking of? 

submitted by Teresa, age 13, Michigan
(March 9, 2013 - 3:12 pm)

I don't know. Maybe a mystery/suspense/drama thing. Like "A guy finds his life in his death" or something like that.

submitted by Joe Dosie Doe, age 13, An Unknown World...
(March 11, 2013 - 4:46 pm)

Do you have any other options besides the villian thing?

submitted by Teresa, age 13, Michigan
(March 11, 2013 - 5:03 pm)

I have the idea that he just needs to find out who he was in order to "restore his soul" or something. Like, he can't move on until he solves his problems. What if I combined both?

submitted by Joe Dosie Doe, age 13, Shady Oaks Asylum
(March 11, 2013 - 7:26 pm)

That could make for a great story! Are you going to write it in the near future?

submitted by Teresa, age 13, Michigan
(March 12, 2013 - 7:04 pm)

Maybe. I'll bookmark this thread for later.

submitted by Joe Dosie Doe, age 13, Shady Oaks Asylum
(March 12, 2013 - 8:52 pm)

Ok! Please let us know your progress once you start it. We can give tips or feedback that might help.

submitted by Teresa, age 13, Michigan
(March 14, 2013 - 4:02 pm)

poke

submitted by Poke
(March 11, 2013 - 2:04 pm)

GOOP!

submitted by Goop
(March 11, 2013 - 4:46 pm)

GOOOOOOOOOOOOP!

submitted by GOOP
(March 11, 2013 - 7:50 pm)

You could do like A Christmas Carol sort of thing. The guy wakes up, discovers he's dead, doesn't know why. Later discovers it's about 50 years AFTER when he lived. Finds his great grandson. Realizes his own acts still affect the future. Finds a way to communicate with his grandson, to help him (cause the dead guy's actions affected the grandson now) helps him, and therefore, corrects what he did so long ago. Just a thought...

submitted by Blonde Heroines Rule
(March 12, 2013 - 2:49 pm)

That is an interesting idea. I sort of like it!

Cappie say hdry. Is Cappie trying to say something about the Hardy Boys? 

submitted by Teresa, age 13, Michigan
(March 12, 2013 - 7:06 pm)
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