Okay, everybody,

Chatterbox: Inkwell

Okay, everybody,

Okay, everybody,

I have 2 stories for you to pick from.

Or if you want I can post both.

These are stories I wrote a long time ago and have NOT revised.

 1. About a girl who is dead and going to a place called the otherworld.

2. About talking sea critters. 

 

submitted by Zoe, age 12, Standish, Maine
(January 25, 2009 - 4:08 pm)

back to the Inkwell

#1 About a girl who is dead and going to a place called the otherworld.

submitted by Meadow, age 11, IL
(January 26, 2009 - 8:53 am)

I should post ooooollllddd stories, too!!!  Hmmm...  They all got deleted when the computer got cleaned for LIMEWIRE....  Too bad....  I stil have the printed version, though! :D

submitted by Paige P, age 12, Gorham, Maine
(January 28, 2009 - 12:23 pm)

#2, talking sea critters.

 

I was so mad a week or so ago, when we got a new computer. Supposedly everything got transferred, but apparently a couple of my file folders were accidently deleted, including the one with all my old stories in it! They weren't really any good, but I like looking back on stuff I wrote in 2nd or 3rd grade and seeing how I've improved.

submitted by Allison P., age 12, Florida
(January 28, 2009 - 2:01 pm)

Remember this is EXACTALLY how I wrote it, no added words, punctuation, or fixed spelling.

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

 

Sara Taylor (dead Girl)  

 

Sara taylor is already dead so you may think their is nothing to write about exep how she died falling off mt Everest when an avelanch hit her suddenly with no warning not even a faint rumbling. If you think this than youre are wrong. But I won't blame you for thinking that because I suspect you have never been dead and there for you have never seen or new about the other world. If you are dead you could have skipped that part but I'll get on with it now.

 

Sara woke up one morning in pitch black. She felt around her and felt the smoothness of polished woo. She had no idea where she was. She put her hand on her stomach and felt a wound a awful, terrible wouns- suddenly dhe remembered she was dead. She tried to push open the top of the coffin. She tried for ten minutes and right when she was about to give up she herd footsteps. Coming closer and closer until they were right nex to the coffin. Sara felt like her hart did a dive into a pool. Then all of a sudden the coffin opened and Sara saw the uglyest face she had ever seen. It had one eyebal, all 9 of his teeth were rotting, half a nose, and, his ears looked as if they had been nibbled by mice every night, (whitch was true). "Pardon me I am Here to take you to the otherworld", the man said

"O.K. but no tricks, Mr. uh-

"Maxwell James Maxwell"

"O.K. I'm ready" said Sara.

"Great" said Mr. Maxwell "we are going to take a portal to the great lake."

"But there are no such things as portals"

"Just because you haven't deen one dosn't mean they don't exist."

 

Zoom in the porthole

 

As Sara recovered ffom winding in the portal she looked at the dhimmering surface of the great lake she saw something moving on the other side but just missed it. Sort of like in the movies when little thing are heppeng in the background but they are going to fast for you to make them out.

 

"Sorry to keep you going but you must get singned in before you are returned to your coffin and locked in"

 

"UH", sara said as she recovered from her thoughts.

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

That's all I wrote and it was all on paper so I had to type it all up!:D:D:D 

 

 

 

submitted by Zoe, age 12, Standish, Maine
(January 28, 2009 - 2:16 pm)

Either of them would be fine. They both sound awesome!!

submitted by Julia, age 12, Oregon
(January 28, 2009 - 2:26 pm)