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Hi I love to write everything from stories to songs and I would like to get your opinion about my latest poem. In case you don't know Old Spice: Fiji is a type of male body spray. The boys in my middle school spray it themselves like it's an Olympic sport. It smells terrible and they like to spray it on us girls.
Anyway, Here is my poem entitled: FIJI
Fiji
I walked onto the bus to a horrible smell! The boys held cans of Old Spice spraying Fiji pel-mel!
I got off the bus and walked into class and my nose hairs developed a horrible rash for they certainly could not stand the stash the boys had of Fiji!
Day after day they were spraying that spray and day after day they were causing dissmay! The students all cried! The teachers resigned because of that Old Spice: Fiji!
submitted by Carolyn M, age 12, England
(July 4, 2012 - 9:21 am)
(July 4, 2012 - 9:21 am)
Hilarious!!
(July 4, 2012 - 6:14 pm)
Thanks for your comment about my poem. It was just one of those things you need to get out of your system. Here is another poem.
What I Hate About The Boys
The boys are gross I'd rather suck my toes.
The boys the boys think they got swag it makes me want to gag
The boys call me bad names they should be ashamed
All in all the boys just stink they outta wash out their attitudes in the sink!
(July 5, 2012 - 3:13 pm)
How was independence day? In England it was just a normal july day. I can't wait for the Olymics my family is driving from Newcastle to see it!
(July 5, 2012 - 3:18 pm)
Yikes. Your boys are annoying. Ours aren't like that, a lot of them can be idiots at times, but they're normally quite nice. And two of them I consider good friends.
(July 5, 2012 - 5:58 pm)
Lucky! *pouts in unfairness*
(July 6, 2012 - 7:12 pm)
It was fun! I can't wait for the Olympics later this summer! I love watching beach volleyball and synchronized diving in the summer. Weird picks, I know, but they're both really exciting!
I love watching both summer and winter Olympics. My summer favorites are synchronized swimming, swimming, gymnastics, and the marathon. Winter favorites: figure skating and cross-country skiing.
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(July 6, 2012 - 9:29 pm)
My favorite Summer Olympics are swimming, diving, gymnastics and volleyball. Go, Sweden!
I should add cycling to my list, too. I just watched the first mountain stage of the 2012 Tour de France live on TV. I am in awe of anyone who can race uphill! I get breathless just watching.
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(July 7, 2012 - 9:53 am)
@ Carolyn:
So cool, you're English! I am a total fan of English things and here are a few things to ask you:
What's the best thing about living in England?
What's the best thing to eat in England?
Do you like tea?
Are you a fan of One Direction? (I am :))
What's your favorite writing genre?
Sorry about all these questions...I was just inspired by your crazy poem!
(July 6, 2012 - 4:32 pm)
@Everinne to answer your questions: The best thing about living in England is the accents! There are so many! I'm from Newcastle so I sound kind of Scottish.
The best thing to eat in England is muffins and eggs!
I love tea!!!
I don't like 1D.
I like historical fiction and adventure as well as comical poems.
(July 7, 2012 - 3:41 pm)