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Wilderness Alpha Book
Wilderness Alpha Book One
Hi guys. As you've probably guessed from the title, I am drafting a series called Wilderness Alpha and am currently working on Book One. I will probably release about one chapter every week and would be thankful for constructive criticism, any comments, etc.
As a test/teaser, here's the prologue from Book One. I have not yet decided what the title should be so if anyone has ideas near the end I would be happy to think about them. Thanks.
Wildnerness Alpha: Book One
Prologue
Lionel Priezac stepped out of his car.
When he had been driving the Mercedes through central London, it had been silver, and its license plate had read 5CGF683. When traveling through abandoned country roads it had been blue, and now, traversing a rutted track in an obscure forest, it was as black as a raven’s feathers. Its license plate was blank.
Lionel Priezac was not a man who took chances. Hidden in the hood of the car was a bug sweeper that checked any electronics in the vicinity for hidden recording devices. The windows were tinted heavily and made of bulletproof glass. The body of the car was armored and could withstand a direct hit from a machine gun or, for that matter, an SUV. And finally, tucked into the innocent briefcase he carried, along with a thin stack of paper, resided a sawed-off shotgun and a commando knife. Neither had yet seen bloodshed, but Priezac liked to be prepared.
He exited the Mercedes outside of a silver complex. Two guards holding machine guns flanked the doorway, but let him pass without response. Inside the building, he stepped into an elevator. Three scanning devices checked his iris, fingerprint, and voice patterns. Had they not matched those in the computer database, the floor plate he was standing on would have blasted 600 volts of electricity through his body. However, satisfied, the elevator proceeded to the fourth floor. Here Priezac entered a vast steel chamber.
It was entirely sealed off from the outdoors. In the center stood a metal behemoth. If a human had stood too close to the machine without protection, his body would literally melt from exposure to radiation. It was one of the most hazardous places on Earth.
Waiting for him was a man in a business suit. The man had dark hair and piercing black eyes. He was quite handsome. His pale face had prominent cheekbones and hollow cheeks, but it suited him all the better. He raised an arm in greeting. Priezac shook his hand.
“Do you have it?” said the man.
Lionel Priezac nodded. “The papers.” He opened his briefcase and reached inside. He withdrew a thin, nondescript sheaf of papers held together by a paper clip. Not a rarity; found in many common executives’ briefcases. But these papers were different. The bold heading at the top read, Wilderness Alpha. To be read by Raven Candle.
The man in question, Raven Candle, took the papers from Priezac’s hands. “Well done. I’ll take these to my office immediately.” He smiled, a rare thing. “If this works, Lionel, we will be some of the richest men on Earth. And the most feared.”
As he walked away, Lionel Priezac reflected on the words. It was good to be feared. And it was good to be rich. The operation would bring him billions of dollars.
He exited the building. Outside the door, a white sedan was waiting. The Mercedes had been taken away and incinerated. It would never be driven again.
Just in case.
Lionel Priezac stepped into the sedan and drove away.
So that was the prologue . . . hope you guys enjoyed it and please comment Thanks.
(July 3, 2012 - 7:09 pm)
@ Admin, I hope this isn't too long...you can cut it in half if you need to, the second part is pretty long
Okay, here goes
Chapter Three
Alex
Brooklyn Public School. Grades 6-12. Tuesday, April 10. 3:02. All the kids rushing out of school, anxious to be home. Normal school day.
As soon as I emerge from the doors, I’m jostled by the moving crowd of kids. Laughing. Talking. Cell phones ringing. I push away and start the walk home.
It quiets down fast. None of the kids at school live in my part of town. Partly the reason I have no friends, I guess. The walk home is pretty lonely. The only company I get is the people waiting at bus stops, and even those thin as I get closer to home.
Ugh.
Home is an ugly square apartment building near industrial Brooklyn, built like a hotel. All red brick and moldering foil made to look like fake plastic made to look like fake wood. All the windows are closed. No view, unless you count abandoned warehouses. The door creaks when I open it. Behind the desk is an old man with a scalp of thin, brittle white hair. Bob Kestrel. Co-owner/doorman/clerk of Brooklyn Quality Apartments. (Quality? Don’t make me laugh.)
Because the elevator’s not working, I take the stairs. I wouldn’t be surprised if one day I came home and the stairs had an Out of Order sign on them too. As it is, they creak dangerously and sway unpredictably. The handrail is so old it splinters if you try to grab on to it.
I knock on the apartment door. Mom’s usually home by now. No answer. I knock again. Still no answer. Nothing unusual. Sometimes she gets detained at work. I pull out my spare key and unlock the door.
Luckily, our apartment is a little nicer than the rest of the building. As soon as we moved in, Mom spent a small fortune replacing furniture and upholstery. There’s not much, though. A black sofa, made for two, a cherry dining table. Pale blue walls. I still remember the name on the flaking paint canister: “Country Sky.”
I wish we lived in the country.
“Mom?” I call. Maybe she didn’t hear me knocking. “Mom?” No answer. I decide to check her room.
Down the hall. It used to be painted vomit-green, but Mom had it repainted blue. She bought a green carpet for the floor.
“Hey, Mom?”
There’s the creak of a door opening.
At first, my brain doesn’t register what that means. But then I realize that if Mom was already home, why would she a.) not respond to my calls and b.) hide in the closet?
Meaty hands clamp over my eyes and mouth. I kick with my feet. My shoes strike flesh, but my captor’s grip remains as firm as ever. “Don’t bother shouting,” says a husky voice in my ear. “No one can hear you.”
Thoughts explode like fireworks in my head, but my mouth is still clamped shut. I grunt behind his palm and get a taste of sweat and stale nicotine. I clamp my mouth shut immediately.
He pulls me out of the hall. My feet drag on the carpet. I try to grab on to furniture, but the man keeps yanking me away from anything I could use as a weapon. I feel like crying. What’s happening to me?
Out the door. Not the front door. The fire escape. Ever been dragged down a fire escape with your eyes covered? I would not recommend it. My feet thunked against each metal step, making the fire escape rattle. I could hear the grunts of the man behind me. Finally, a step down; I feel concrete beneath my feet.
Sound of a car door opening.
Suddenly my mouth and eyes are free. I’m tossed into the backseat of a small silver Japanese compact. The door shuts. I lunge for it, but it’s locked. Safety locks? Yeah. Windows. Locked as well.
The man gets in the driver’s seat.
He has red hair and watery blue eyes. He looks skinny, but I know from his grip he’s stronger than he looks. His skin is pale. Freckles all over his arms and face.
“Where are you taking me?”
He punches the accelerator. “Seatbelt on.”
“Answer my question.”
“Why?”
Somehow, I can’t find the energy to argue with that.
Being kidnapped is simultaneously a.) more scary and b.) more boring than they show in movies. Driving through crowded Brooklyn in a tiny car is not exactly the thrilling chase shown in movies. But at the same time, it’s terrifying. Need I say more?
Suddenly we’re turning onto an abandoned street, lined on both sides with gray, derelict warehouses. I groan. “What the heck are you going to do with me?”
“Why should I tell you?”
“ ’Cause you’re taking me somewhere against my will. I should have a right to know where.”
He chuckled. “Europe.”
I rolled my eyes. “South of France, is that it?”
“Nope.”
I had no doubt he was being sarcastic. No doubt he was going to lock me up in one of the warehouses and ask for a ransom.
As it turned out, I was wrong.
(July 21, 2012 - 11:04 am)