When the rain
Chatterbox: Down to Earth
When the rain
When the rain falls and the wind blows
When the car stalls and the lie lows
When the tropic front hits the cold
When the collosseum grows old
As clouded waters turn to ice
The weather isn't quite as nice
But only the eye has the gift to behold
And heavy the weight grows as illness forms mold
Those unspoken words; the stormclouds of life
Perhaps are more deadly than even a knife
That's a poem. You already knew that. I'm miserable right now.
If you can pick apart the meaning, go for it.
If you want to guess me, go for it.
And yes, there's a reason this is on Down to Earth. :(
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(February 8, 2017 - 8:52 pm)
(February 8, 2017 - 8:52 pm)
Awww. I'm sorry, whoever you are. I really like that poem, though. I've always struggled with making my poems rhyme so I respect those who accomplish that. *applause* That, and the overall quality was amazing! (Isn't it sad how we write some of our best things when we're broken?) I hope your day/mood picks up. *hugs*
~Poetic Panda
(February 8, 2017 - 10:47 pm)
*hugs :( :( :(*
I hope that makes you feel better. Know that we're always here for you.
(February 11, 2017 - 3:57 pm)