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Description of my favorite star that shines over the backyard. It really is the brightest one in the sky.
A majestic cloud rising up from the tree tops, fiery red fading into deep purple. It suffocates the indigo sky in which a jewel incrusted lone sailor floats, clinging to a life preserver thrown desperately from a crew sailing on an ivory ship with a billowy pearl sail. He shines with all his might, giving his fellow sailors something to look for. This little star is so full of hope and so bright, it fills anyone who looks at it with hope and makes you want to shine bright too.
submitted by JFB, age 12, New York
(February 26, 2009 - 7:04 pm)
(February 26, 2009 - 7:04 pm)
Wow, that is a beautiful description!
(February 27, 2009 - 9:03 am)
That's.....wow....that's really amazing. I'm not kidding, that's so detailed, it's one of the best descriptive paragraphs I've ever read. And that includes Harry Potter, which is practically perfect writing in my eyes.
(March 2, 2009 - 7:31 pm)