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Hey, everybody, I
Hey, everybody, I propose a new kind of round robin: poetry. With a twist. Here's how it goes: the person who starts (that being me) writes the last line of the poem. Next person writes the second-to-last line, and so on until we come to the beginning. That make any sense? Here's the last line: The bits of flame against the sky. Sorry, that's a kind of hard one. Oh, btw, with every post please include the whole poem so far, with your line at the top. Remember, my line is the last one, not the first!
-EH
submitted by Emily H. :), age 14!, Sparks, NV
(September 18, 2009 - 10:31 am)
(September 18, 2009 - 10:31 am)
Oops - this really should be in the Inkwell. Sorry. I'll stick with CaC since this is where it is, I guess.
-EH
(September 18, 2009 - 4:06 pm)
Or if it stays at the back I'll repost it in Inkwell. :P
-EH
(September 18, 2009 - 11:20 pm)
((Just for the record, 95% of my rhyming poetry is really, really bad. But... this is fun. :D))
Glaring out with a forlorn sigh
(At) the bits of flame against the sky
((Y'see? I added a word, which is probably cheating, and rhymed "sigh" with "sky." o.O I am soooo clever.))
(September 19, 2009 - 7:47 am)
Nah, adding words or changing verb tenses is perfectly legal. :D I ilke it, personally.
-EH
(September 19, 2009 - 2:12 pm)
Heehee. Thanks. :)
(September 20, 2009 - 9:21 am)
((I'll have to add a non-rhyming one now ;) ))
Though all was quiet in the forest so deep.
Glaring out with a forlorn sigh,
(At) the bits of flame against the sky.
(September 21, 2009 - 7:58 pm)
Every other line is going to be really easy if we stick with this rhyme scheme. :D
-EH
(September 22, 2009 - 9:24 pm)
Alright, so we just have to make it rhyme with the
original line?
(September 25, 2009 - 4:52 pm)