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a poam is.......challenge
a poam is.......challenge
this is a challenge for every younge poam writer.
write an origanal poam about the worl around you.
good luck.
this ones mine
a little town is a clam place to slow down
and move at ones own pace.
a little town is a quiet place
where every one knows each others face
a little town is my home
and this experience is something all should know.
submitted by Star G., age 12, Centeral IL
(June 29, 2016 - 3:47 pm)
(June 29, 2016 - 3:47 pm)
That's a very good poem, but (Do you mind some constructive criticism?) maybe you should ask your mom or dad for some help with your spelling?
I love how your poem has a warm feeling to it, how it expresses your love of your town! I also love that last line. "[And] this experience is something all should know." It's a nice ending, and really conveys the theme of the poem, that everyone should have a calm, quiet home where they should feel safe. Nice job!
(June 30, 2016 - 3:18 pm)
Niiiiice Star! Good job with that poem. Keep it up! Do you camp nanowrimo out of curiosity?
(July 1, 2016 - 9:48 pm)